E might not be suitable for this lol

Really unique though, the sound design really sold it for me, captured the uneasiness perfectly. Dialogue was entirely unpredictable, and really changed the perspective of the narrative, again a great choice. I think the only improvements I can suggest have to do with visuals. Particularly the use of white, in film and animation white usually signifies emptiness, but you have a lot going on in the scene so it contrasts and feels as though it doesn't fit. While this may add to the unsettling nature of the piece, the same could be done with greater effect by using grey, beige, teal etc... Any dull colour would work as a good background for the content here. The sketchy style is fine altough more frames would help it look less jittery.
All in all though you have something very interesting going on here, keep it up :)

loved getting lost in this, you have a great sense of tone. i wouldn't have panned it so hard though, it felt dragging at times

i really wanted this to go forever

really creative percussion and sampling, compliments the bass really well. i feel as though some additional counterpoint to the bassline would do wonders here, especially during the ending where there's a bit more chaos. really cool!

i love everything about this. funny, creepy and cute all at once

I mean it's clearly ironic but if you're putting this under fine art you should expect the score you get lol.

Try to avoid tracing other peoples artwork then passing it off as your own. Tracing isn't bad in itself if you're doing it to learn, especially since you're still young, but this could easily be considered theft.
It doesn't really help that your profile pic is a copy of Grian's avatar either.
That being said, the colouring is nice and fits to a simple colour scheme well. Shading is a bit odd considering the light source but at least it's consistent. All the technical stuff is fine, just try to make something of your own next time, eh?